Hi! I'm ~Moonlight Miracle~, I am a dunskin tabino mare with a black mane and tail. I am looking for a herd and a stallion.

(try it like this)

Example horse moved around neighing for a stallion." hello my name is ......"

Moonlight Miracle looks around she then rears neighing as she hits the earth she lunges into a gallop she gallops to a pond with a waterfall she smiles and goes under the waterfall after being completly soaked she neighs again this time for a stallion

That post was much better Reality Stables... However, you were in the use of a very long run on sentence.. Here I have bolded the mistakes and then made corrections.

Quote :

Moonlight Miracle looks around she then rears neighing as she hits the earth she lunges into a gallop she gallops to a pond with a waterfall she smiles and goes under the waterfall after being completly soaked she neighs again this time for a stallion

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Moonlight Miracle looks around. She rears, neighing as she hits the earth. She lunges into a gallop, heading towards a pond with a waterfall, she smiles as she goes under the water. After she was completly soaked she neighs again, this time it was for a stallion.

This is just a tip, you don't have to use my advice but using proper grammer and such will really help you advance in the role-playing area.

And thank you windheart1 for giving a tip(:

-RockStar.

(any time!)