"Zeus."He said looking straight into Dartka's eyes, he snorted.

Chelsea gazed at Darka carefully. She'd never tried to ride her, even though they probably shared enough trust. "Mind if I sit on your back for a minute? She thought questioningly to Darka. She still looked at her. She might make a good racer as well. She glanced at the water horse, before looking around for the unicorn. I sent a message to her, hoping for a response. "Where are you?" I asked.

" Pleasure to meet zeus. I'm Darka." she replyed. It was hard to be friendly for her, but she tryed.

She nodded at Chelsea. Of course she could. (using iPod and it didntload this right so couldn't use italics)

(That earlier post sucked. I ran out of skittles.)


Chelsea smiled, and said "thanks" before swiftly hoping onto the mare's back. She smiled, and her hair was blown back by a sudden gust of wind. She looked up, and saw dark clouds. She blinked, then looked at the water, and smiled.

( Nah, it was good. Just make sure you cover it all, in writing a good pice shows not only your character, but their suroundings, how the area around affects them and they it. It's all a chemistry in writing.)

Darka flicked an ear as Chelsea got on her and sighed. She swished her inky black tail contentedly. Her eyes half closed as she calmed down. A light breeze ruffled her mane then became a howling wind. She shook her head and looked warily at the clouds. The mare stomped a hoof, scoring the ground with a deep print. She felt Chelsea's calmness and settled a little.

He flicked an ear, and resumed grazing quietly.

She winnied at him. The mare grinned and trotted forward, mindful of Chelsea, and nipped him. Then she gleefuly trotted away, swishing her tail, and daringg him to catch her.

Chelsea, not expecting the mare to trot, she nearly fell off her back end, but grabbed her mane just in time. She gently pulled herself back up, and patted her neck, laughed softly

Darka nickered softly at Chelsea [i]he he he[\i] she thought to her. The mare continued tortting happily, the breeze ruffling her mane and tail. She neighed to Geo to race her.

Chelsea twisted some of Darka's mane in her hands, and got ready. She smiled at Geo, and he walked up beside Geo. "Kick his butt, Darka. You should see him, he almost cries." She said, a slight chuckle in the thought she sent to the black mare

Darka smiled and sidled up to Geo. " he is going down. I'm Georgian grand, honey. Sport horse. No way imma gonna lose" she thought to Chelsea. To Geo she said, "ready...set...GO!" The huge mare lept forward, ears pinnedand ready for battle. She streched out, galloping low to the ground. Her midnight color became a blurr as she raced along. A large fallen oak lay in their path as she ran to the finish. Darka streched out further, measuring her strides as she approched it. The jump was a bit over 3 1/2 feet. She bounded over and made a flying leap, easily clearing the log. She raced forward, hoping she'd win.

He lifted his head and stared, he snorted and bobbed his head, he began practicing his galloping skills.He was running, he slipped and reared as he passed another horse, he continued running.He managed to do a somersault or flip, in mid-air he snorted in surprise and stopped galloping for now.

Daria turned an ear to zues. She snorted lightly. " wanna race too?" she asked

"Naw.."He said, as he began grazing once again.

Darka flicked her tail. "suit yourself then" she said to him. Im bored, I belive I'll go somewhere more interesting. she thought to Chelsea.

He looked around boredly, he galloped into the water.He jumped splashing deep, when he came back up.He was a water horse, he snorted and clamped out of the water.